Based off the feedback that I have received for my unit 1 work, I need to be more detailed and explanatory of why I do what I do in my writing. For unit 2, I plan to like Haltman says look beyond the “physical aspect”. I noticed that in my work I took a lot of the parts of block #965 literally. That is the main reason that I struggled so much with my research and kept coming up with little to no results. Basically, I need to look deeper into my research and source rather than just skimming the surface. I need to be asking better questions that will open up way more possibilities for research.
I’ll come back to this post once I have turned everything in and received full feedback.